Hi All!

So, following is the second story I was thinking of going on to.
Thoughts and opinions appreciated, as ever.

 

 

 

( Story Two )

 

Well, that’s the two of 'em.

Thoughts, comments?

I’m kinda leaning towards the first, fun one, and I think it'd be good to 'get back to the roots' and have a story which keeps all the characters 'in character' if you know what I mean. But I also have a lot of ideas for the second one, with Palpatine leading Vader to think that Luke’s Obi-Wan’s illegitimate son so they’ll always be at loggerheads, and Leia having grown up on Tatooine and joined the Rebellion…

The first story’s a lot shorter and more straightforward, but hopefully a lot of fun.

 

Which is it to be, One or Two?

Hi.

 

Okay, my apologies if this all goes haywire, but I’m learning LJ as I go along (A much-used speech in my life; just substitute LJ for pretty much anything!).

Okay, a while ago I said I’d like to post a bit of my new story to get some opinions and I never got round to it, so in an effort to learn LJ, I thought I’d have a go.
Anyhow, I was going to just post that one excerpt then decided to post an excerpt from both of the stories I’m thinking of picking up after Brink, and see which everyone thought would be the better choice... no, there isn’t a third, this is all I have…  ;)

So, I picked the two excerpts based on the most tenuous link you’ve ever heard, which is this; they both have a spice stick in them.
Neither have names yet, I’m afraid. In a quantum leap of descriptive designation, I thought we’d call ‘em One and Two. Hope you like.

  

( Story One )

 

Okay, Story Two to follow tomorrow probably.
Thoughts, Comments?

Thanks, Patch.

testing testing...